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PostSubject: Demonic Soul   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:11 pm

Only half-devil creatures can survive their deaths;
One must be cursed or demon to have his soul die once,
and yet to still be called alive;

Ghost-souls riding teen girls'bodies-
mechanisms led by the uncosciousness..-
in a soporiphic state..
the mind has been drugged with redundant hopes
the thoughts have been anihilated..
all for oblivion's sake.

i was...
laid gracefully in a grave of reverie
by a malefactor wearing christic wings,
whispering angelic rites..
grabbing my soul with ritualic gestures,
caressing my thoughts like a benign sickness..

i am.. now seen as
this unscathed body that shelters an old pain.
Limping,my heart shall not recover its trustful gait again.

Centuries of inner time spent in a grave..
have passed, and are now far away..
today, this wistful soul evades.

unconscious and subconscious thoughts converged
resulted in an overwhelming flame..
of love and rage..
giving this being another shape..

you desgined me..the way a sculptor carves
removing trees from their natural life,
diving with knives into their core.

you tempted me into your deadly possession
the way we carefully pick up flowers
and let them dry between the shut covers of books you never open..
dehydrated of essence, empty.. but colorful on the outside..
with no escape, no hope to ever feel daylight.


one must be cursed to die yet be alive..
to kiss death and desire the eternal time,
yet to walk trhough the world and to survive..

28 nov. 2008


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PostSubject: Re: Demonic Soul   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:37 pm

you desgined me..the way a sculptor carves <---- (carves?!)
removing trees from their natural life, <---- (hehehe :G trees, and with carves in the line above it, it makes TOO much sense)
diving with knives into their core. <---- (knives... is that what they call it these daysHm?! core :G:G hehe :G)

on a brighter note though, i like this part:
you tempted me into your deadly possession
the way we carefully pick up flowers
and let them dry between the shut covers of books you never open..
dehydrated of essence, empty.. but colorful on the outside..
with no escape, no hope to ever feel daylight.


one must be cursed to die yet be alive..
to kiss death and desire the eternal time,
yet to walk trhough the world and to survive..
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