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PostSubject: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:23 pm

Wondrous miracles gathered to create such magnificence
Eternal beauty... lasting for aeons of brilliance
A gift from the meadows of heaven
Bestowed upon a race... unworthy of their own tavern
Tall strong fortresses of richness beyond imagination
Once haven of green peace... offered as salvation
Became a wasteland of torment... filled with intoxication
Withstood thousands of plagues
Never has it suffered from the simplest ache
All its kind have died... all are gone
But not this one, it has fought for so long
Tried to keep hope... to wait for the rain
Tried to seek serenity, held on for so long... all in vain
Now the time has come
for its story shall not be long
marching onward as it is seen ahead
determined to kill... the simplest rule for pain... won't be bent
with a whip of hand, beauty won't stand
as it endures the strike, that tree must abide
to the treacherous law it has foreseen
to live alone... watching all surroundings decay
to die alone... by the hands of those it was sent to help stay...
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PostSubject: Re: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:25 pm

ok..ill post a comment even BEFORE reading hte poem..Very Happy the title just amuses me terribly.. "love for the trees..." Very Happy should i go on? hahahaaha
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PostSubject: Re: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:29 pm

thats nice. i really love trees, theyre so wonderful and quiet.. and sort of sad.. we, humans destroy them scratch hmm
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PostSubject: Re: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:31 pm

Freyja wrote:
ok..ill post a comment even BEFORE reading hte poem..Very Happy the title just amuses me terribly.. "love for the trees..." Very Happy should i go on? hahahaaha


u're one to talk -.-' cherry tree lover -.-'
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PostSubject: Re: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:31 pm

Freyja wrote:
thats nice. i really love trees, theyre so wonderful and quiet.. and sort of sad.. we, humans destroy them scratch hmm


i love it when u sum up the idea -.-' doofus -.-'
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PostSubject: Re: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:02 pm

i was only saying that i agree with the message of your poem!Very Happy its nice
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PostSubject: Re: Eternal Beauty Of Trees   Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:02 pm

Freyja wrote:
i was only saying that i agree with the message of your poem!Very Happy its nice


of course it's nice XP i wrote it XP

thnQ Very Happy
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