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Freyja
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PostSubject: Whims of fate   Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:46 pm

Is it sadness..or otherwise?
What we feel is agony…
Our fate and God were wise
-or playing with our destiny.

A moment of silence-
My breath has stopped..
At the sound of your name..
My pulse has dropped.

An eternal moment
To meet your thoughts
A respite for the torment
That s teasing my nights.

The time will be dead
My eyes will obey
No longer sad
They’ll rise to be tamed.
My hasty heart will shut up
To be hold in your hands
A most desirable trap
That has crossed my dreams.
Ill surrender…

May 26th 2007
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PostSubject: Re: Whims of fate   Fri Apr 17, 2009 9:22 pm

Freyja wrote:

To be hold in your hands

first of all, hEld XP dumbass -.-' and well let's just say with this thing u proved that less is definitely more! this is shorter than anything u've written that i've read before and it is by far one of the best! and again, i have no pervasive jokes about it -.-' STOP WRITING UNJOKABLE STUFF! i need to make fun of something... to LIVE! Shocked
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