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Freyja
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PostSubject: You've died..   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:12 pm

im sorry that you've died..
i have to tell you that you've had to die..
i won't let you come back to life;
to me you'll have to die just every time..

this time you have to do it right.
i don't want to kil you..and yet you gotta die.
you crushed my soul, youre blind,
and so you killed yourself, forever to my mind.

join me in death when you'd like to come back
for you can never join me back in life

i'm still mourning your deceased soul
so sad you've died
so sad it even made me cry
so sad..you were the only one that seemed alive..

sept. 2007


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PostSubject: Re: You've died..   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:39 pm

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Freyja wrote:
im sorry that youve died..
i have to tell you that youve had to die
i wont let you come back to life
to me youll have to die just every time..


ok this part is like SERIOUSLY hilarious i mean u're sry he died, then u tell him that he had to die (figures, he's already dead, which established the "had" to die) then since he's dead he'll probably won't be able to come back to life on his own let alone u not allowing him to do so and well he's already dead, normal human beings die once, unless he's smthn else
Freyja wrote:
this time you have to do it right

ok i can't comment on this part it's simply too... oana like XP
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PostSubject: Re: You've died..   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:49 pm

its a metaphor:D he didnt really die..physically..he only died to me.. to my mind and my soul its like i consider him to be dead
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PostSubject: Re: You've died..   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:51 pm

idc it's dumb
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