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Freyja
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PostSubject: ...Undo...   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:18 pm

One more tear won;t matter..
One more night won't change the dawning,
One more broken heart won't count,
One more candle won't return its light..
I've died.

Melted candles cannot recover their flames
tears can't spring back towards their angelic caves..
Life can't enshroud the rotten corpse..
My palm can never return to be held into yours.

you can't undo my broken heart..
I'll be mourning you forever.

jan. 2008
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PostSubject: Re: ...Undo...   Mon Apr 20, 2009 8:38 pm

Freyja wrote:
One more tear won;t matter..
One more night won't change the dawning,
One more broken heart won't count,
One more candle won't return its light..
I've died.

i love how it states several sentences first then "i've died" it's like "i've died -.-' oh fuck -.-' " Very Happy and fyi it's won't not won;t -.-'
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