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Freyja
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PostSubject: Resurrection   Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:04 pm

these tears that melt in lavander
metamorphosed in fears painted in my mind with recurrence.

idealistic dreams keep failing,
under the siege of fate's deliberance.

crazy illusions revelled their meaning.
ashes of blood spread in the rain, jeopardize purity..
on the wings of death i keep sailing
as in a contagious vortex i'm caught...

iron birds stripe the sky like knives
the flower whispers "forget me not",
...i was born from your wings.

green eyes are now filtering the lights of a new horizon.
the realms of a new existence arise from dust.

this locked chamber has been enlightened,
revealing the unhidden doors that i can open.
from your wings i commenced my flight,
i now set myself free from the cage of your illusions.

march 2008
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PostSubject: Re: Resurrection   Sat Apr 25, 2009 1:34 am

Freyja wrote:
these tears that melt in lavander
metamorphosed in fears painted in my mind with recurrence.

idealistic dreams keep failing,
under the siege of fate's deliberance.

crazy illusions revelled their meaning.
ashes of blood spread in the rain, jeopardize purity..
on the wings of death i keep sailing
as in a contagious vortex i'm caught...

iron birds stripe the sky like knives
the flower whispers "forget me not",
...i was born from your wings.

green eyes are now filtering the lights of a new horizon.
the realms of a new existence arise from dust.

this locked chamber has been enlightened,
revealing the unhidden doors that i can open.
from your wings i commenced my flight,
i now set myself free from the cage of your illusions.

march 2008


ok i'm really sleepy so i'm not going to bash it as i would normally do -.-' (enjoy this opportunity while it lasts -.-') it's a bit lame yet not in an extremely bad lame kind of way Hm just that it's a bit monotonous Hm i like the idea of it though Hm
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PostSubject: Re: Resurrection   Sat Apr 25, 2009 1:50 am

you copy-paste my whole poem ? Very Happy now THAT's lame! 40-0 pour moi against your function-less brain Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Resurrection   Sat Apr 25, 2009 1:24 pm

in my defense, it WAS 130 am and i was clinically asleep
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PostSubject: Re: Resurrection   Sat Apr 25, 2009 4:07 pm

uhm tell me about it Neutral i kept writing until 3 am and went to sleep at 3 and smth and stilll i didnt finish writing!
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