Frozen tears made ice and gave rise to my castle.
captive , I can only reach the reality inside of it.
The only light of a moon that never sets nor rises,
The sound of walls being crashed by the waves of the sea
Threaten to obfuscate my reason and innund my universe..

With dismay I run against my array of spider webb,
A gesture away from my nakedness.
I try to cover my scars in my dainty self
And hide away my weakness.


My castle is haunted by Sacred Pain standing aloof..
Sneaking in my bed, we sleep everynight together
The bound has tied us tight forever,
Escape to neither of us can be real nor true..

My darkened castle stands on mourning lands
And earthquakes make its flesh quiver...
Sobbing with dispair in these unsteady sands,
Of illness my heart burns its peaks in fever.

Shallow structures betray my fragility,
Jaunting forever pain surveils the stoop..
No hope nor indulgence shall bring tranquillity.
My soul and sanity you took..

2008, 23d jan.

Freyja wrote:

A gesture away from my nakedness
I try to cover my scars in my dainty self
And hide away my weakness.



nakedness u say XP too much fancy english!!! u know can just look the stuff up so let me get this straight, basically when the poem sucks u stuff it with fancy english so that no one wud understand it well enough to tell how much it sucks nah jk

thank God:D at least you didnt make a kinky joke out of it!!

Freyja wrote:
thank God:D at least you didnt make a kinky joke out of it!!


i cud!!! but i won't *stares proudly*